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发表于 2009-5-24 10:34:35
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Your English is great.
There are some words maybe need to be discussed with you. \"clean air---fresh air\",dustless---clean. \"I could see some raindrops were still clinging onto the leaves...
Anyway, it is a beautiful piece of work,Well done!
-----Madeline |
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