Just I hope

日偏食

I saw
the leaves turn yellow like
butterflies flying in breezee
I saw
the sun was shining in yourface
in your smile
made my heartto be warmer
though
the wind of this season
is a little cold

At that time
see u
see the sunny
and
the style of u
just I hope is
warm enough
sunny enough

日偏食

怎么没有人跟帖呢。。。

Dean

Sweet words, Well-written!Autumn breeze, warm sunshine, sweet smile, good hope.

倒霉的蜗牛

不老大明白呢！

日偏食

引用第3楼chong123zi于11-17-2008 09:52发表的 Re:Just I hope :
不老大明白呢！

没想让你明白。。。
嘿嘿~
去查字典翻译一下。。。

Dean

flying butterfly in breezee中的butterfly是不是应该用bitterly?

相约百年

引用第5楼Dean于11-17-2008 10:22发表的 Re:Just I hope :
flying butterfly in breezee中的butterfly是不是应该用bitterly?

难道是flying bitterly？
我狂晕！！！

Dean

I don't think we can see butterflies in late autumn when leaves turn yellow. Or perhaps the leaves are flying in the breeze like butterflies.

日偏食

已经变黄的叶子像风中飞舞的蝴蝶。。。
是这个意思
不是说在现在的季节看见蝴蝶。。。

Dean

Betteruse butterflies, in plural form of butterlfy.

made my heartto be warmer--made my heart warmer, better?