Every Moment Of My Life

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引用第9楼Dean于11-23-2008 21:30发表的:


中学老师？我不是。没有资格。

从你写的东西能看出来，都是中学课本的一些句式。一些简单句的堆积，每句基本都是主系表结构且不离is ；it；there is；today，When接上一大串，谓语置于句末，每句主语重复，也不换词或者用指代……而且看得出来，句子都是根据句法句式自己想出来的，而不是读过，听过学来的，呵呵，让我想起我的初中老师。说的不妥之处，请见谅

Dean

We were all taught by English teachers in high schools. How could we learn English well without learning it at high schools? I remember one of my English teachers told us students that if we could use one sentence to express our ideas clearly why we should use two. The simp ler, the better. When we speak or write in English we want our listeners or readers to understand us. We don't want to show how well we have mastered English by using long and complicated sentences. We do not want every English learner to be as Shakespeare.

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我也不是老师

Dean

Most people are or were students. That's why there are fewer teachers than students.i use subject+link verb +predictive in the first sentence and there+ be sentence pattern in the second one.

Dean

引用第10楼wasw于11-23-2008 21:38发表的:

从你写的东西能看出来，都是中学课本的一些句式。一些简单句的堆积，每句基本都是主系表结构且不离is ；it；there is；today，When接上一大串，谓语置于句末，每句主语重复，也不换词或者用指代……而且看得出来，句子都是根据句法句式自己想出来的，而不是读过，听过学来的，呵呵，让我想起我的初中老师。说的不妥之处，请见谅

从你的话语中可以看出，你经常读一些专业英文书籍。专业英文书籍只是给少数专业人员看的。里面专业词汇，表达方式比较严谨。多用书面语言。而广大英语爱好者很少或几乎不看这类文献的。 请看下面例句，大家可以看出他们的不同。
A. He bought an English book at the bookstore.
B. He purchased an English book at the bookstore.
A. It shows that the man is very ill.
B. The above mentioned phenomenon indicates that the female person suffers from a serious disease.
A. He has done a lot for the cause of education.
B. He has contributed much to the cause of education.
A. The air-conditioner uses much electricity.
B. The air-conditioner consumes much electricity.

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引用第14楼Dean于11-24-2008 08:43发表的:

从你的话语中可以看出，你经常读一些专业英文书籍。专业英文书籍只是给少数专业人员看的。里面专业词汇，表达方式比较严谨。多用书面语言。而广大英语爱好者很少或几乎不看这类文献的。 请看下面例句，大家可以看出他们的不同。
A. He bought an English book at the bookstore.
B. He purchased an English book at the bookstore.
A. It shows that the man is very ill.
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有道理，看来我也需要多学一点口语，免得之乎者也，呵呵，谢谢