日偏食 发表于 2008-11-15 21:48:13

Just I hope

I saw
the leaves turn yellow like
butterflies flying in breezee
I saw
the sun was shining in yourface
in your smile
made my heartto be warmer
though
the wind of this season
is a little cold

At that time
see u
see the sunny
and
the style of u
just I hope is
warm enough
sunny enough

日偏食 发表于 2008-11-17 08:27:30

Re:Just I hope

怎么没有人跟帖呢。。。

Dean 发表于 2008-11-17 08:54:13

Re:Just I hope

Sweet words, Well-written!Autumn breeze, warm sunshine, sweet smile, good hope.

倒霉的蜗牛 发表于 2008-11-17 09:52:54

Re:Just I hope

不老大明白呢！

日偏食 发表于 2008-11-17 10:19:51

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引用第3楼chong123zi于11-17-2008 09:52发表的 Re:Just I hope :
不老大明白呢！
没想让你明白。。。
嘿嘿~
去查字典翻译一下。。。

Dean 发表于 2008-11-17 10:22:51

Re:Just I hope

flying butterfly in breezee中的butterfly是不是应该用bitterly?

相约百年 发表于 2008-11-17 10:32:12

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引用第5楼Dean于11-17-2008 10:22发表的 Re:Just I hope :
flying butterfly in breezee中的butterfly是不是应该用bitterly?
难道是flying bitterly？
我狂晕！！！

Dean 发表于 2008-11-17 11:00:47

Re:Just I hope

I don't think we can see butterflies in late autumn when leaves turn yellow. Or perhaps the leaves are flying in the breeze like butterflies.

日偏食 发表于 2008-11-17 12:01:22

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已经变黄的叶子像风中飞舞的蝴蝶。。。
是这个意思
不是说在现在的季节看见蝴蝶。。。

Dean 发表于 2008-11-17 13:14:31

Re:Just I hope

Betteruse butterflies, in plural form of butterlfy.

made my heartto be warmer--made my heart warmer, better?
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